Comments on: Elfie and the Elf’s Adventure – Competition Winner

By: Lilly

Lilly — Thu, 26 Sep 2019 19:32:43 +0000

I Love this story so much

By: Rockymathur

Rockymathur — Thu, 15 Nov 2018 18:03:53 +0000

Great story

By: Emma

Emma — Mon, 04 Jun 2018 17:42:01 +0000

I think it is a great story but it is a little to short but only short for me i think you did a great job you should make more books but a little more longer. I think you did i great job!

By: Anonymous

Anonymous — Thu, 31 May 2018 00:31:53 +0000

It is short

By: Iryna

Iryna — Mon, 21 May 2018 19:38:42 +0000

this book was awesome you should make more books like this

By: nova

nova — Wed, 02 May 2018 22:35:36 +0000

cute!!!

By: Nafees apa

Nafees apa — Sun, 15 Apr 2018 13:40:06 +0000

Its a very warm story but I don’t like it,I love it!

By: Hela

Hela — Thu, 05 Apr 2018 08:58:48 +0000

Cool story I like it but it was short but cool marierose l love the story I am 7 years old and I am asso writing a book but it is going to be long I hope my story will be published on story nory just like you what do you guys think you can also write a story of your own it can be about anything just don’t give up too easily and use your wonderful imagination and make a book or story just like marierose have fun and goo luck for all of you who will write one.

By: purity

purity — Wed, 04 Apr 2018 20:30:36 +0000

very short but nice and sweet

By: alexia

alexia — Mon, 26 Feb 2018 16:44:53 +0000

i think that this book is very cool and especially for little kids

By: elam

elam — Sun, 25 Feb 2018 20:54:34 +0000

i loved it

By: Sophia

Sophia — Sun, 25 Feb 2018 16:52:39 +0000

Hi Love it it’s good

By: paige

paige — Thu, 22 Feb 2018 19:58:11 +0000

cooooooooooooool

By: viany

viany — Wed, 21 Feb 2018 20:02:04 +0000

it is a good story?

By: Reatta

Reatta — Wed, 21 Feb 2018 17:33:45 +0000

The story was okay

By: Emma

Emma — Tue, 20 Feb 2018 20:04:23 +0000

I love this

By: copernicus

copernicus — Tue, 20 Feb 2018 01:09:35 +0000

this is so short because i read books like bricks.

By: kid

kid — Sun, 18 Feb 2018 23:02:59 +0000

it good

By: Adrian

Adrian — Thu, 15 Feb 2018 19:02:36 +0000

Love itttt

By: Nat

Nat — Thu, 15 Feb 2018 02:33:33 +0000

Ausome

By: Alual

Alual — Wed, 14 Feb 2018 10:17:00 +0000

I really like this story it’s nice

By: Winter

Winter — Wed, 14 Feb 2018 08:57:27 +0000

Boring

By: (nickname) Goldystar

(nickname) Goldystar — Mon, 12 Feb 2018 14:23:17 +0000

Any more competitions? I have a long story in mind that’s made based on the series called warrior cats

By: flutter pokemon msp

flutter pokemon msp — Mon, 12 Feb 2018 01:44:37 +0000

cool story, story nory and thx rosey for letting us listen to elfie-elfs-adventure-competition-winner

By: Emily

Emily — Thu, 01 Feb 2018 02:21:34 +0000

Wow That’s my name!am I famus?!?!

By: Reegan

Reegan — Wed, 31 Jan 2018 16:55:43 +0000

This story was very short.

By: Ava

Ava — Mon, 29 Jan 2018 11:09:43 +0000

Great app

By: miley

miley — Sun, 28 Jan 2018 02:47:52 +0000

Hey!I thought I already comnted on this story!Oh well At least I get to do it again!Oh and by the way yhat was reall nice!Happy face!

By: N

Fri, 26 Jan 2018 10:40:59 +0000

GOOD!

By: AMORA

AMORA — Thu, 25 Jan 2018 23:50:51 +0000

I liked the story but not obeying Santa Claus might get you on the Naghty List

By: Scarlet

Scarlet — Wed, 24 Jan 2018 21:47:37 +0000

I wish it could be bigger

By: G

Wed, 24 Jan 2018 12:22:23 +0000

To bla

By: Anonymous

Anonymous — Mon, 22 Jan 2018 15:12:24 +0000

i did not like it a first but i liked the story

By: Maha

Maha — Mon, 22 Jan 2018 10:41:31 +0000

I’m very grateful for your efforts . Bless you.

By: Immyauthor

Immyauthor — Sat, 20 Jan 2018 22:06:30 +0000

Really great story. Well done

By: Oliver

Oliver — Sat, 20 Jan 2018 22:04:44 +0000

Very good I like it but a bit longer next time

By: Nguyen

Nguyen — Sat, 20 Jan 2018 11:14:36 +0000

It’s good

By: Kate

Kate — Fri, 19 Jan 2018 16:00:27 +0000

This is a magiical, modern story with pertinent PC issues, e.g. health and safety, the shock of Santa’s refusal to transport the puppy so he would not endanger it and the girl-to-girl communication that resulted in a girl-elf’s solidarity with a human girl. The story’s length is irrelevant with all these points having been made. Great job, Marierose! “The sole of wit is brevity.”

By: Alex

Alex — Fri, 19 Jan 2018 13:39:14 +0000

BAD STORY

By: GREA!

GREA! — Thu, 18 Jan 2018 17:29:06 +0000

GREAT!